03-05-2011, 11:56 AM
It seems very well put together. I think it could be a little longer. I like the suspense at the end.
Working on a novel.
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Working on a novel. - by Cobalt - 03-05-2011, 10:21 AM
RE: Working on a novel. - by Justin - 03-05-2011, 11:56 AM
RE: Working on a novel. - by Cobalt - 03-05-2011, 02:17 PM
RE: Working on a novel. - by Step Up 3™ - 03-05-2011, 03:38 PM
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