03-02-2011, 01:18 PM
The song is about my ex-girlfriend and my previous drug addication. (Which I've successfully tossed aside.)
This still isn't finished.
I just wanted to hear a personal opinion.
Thanks in advance.
One More Thing
Rainclouds gather, raindrops drippin'.
One more and I would drown in this world where I am trippin'.
My friends ignore me and formed a group where I don't fit in.
So tired of waitin' for those damn pills to kick in.
My mama doesn't know me,
my father lost his homie.
My shawty turned her back isn't there anymore to hold me.
Slowly, I wipe my tears and think 'bout what my grandma told me.
"From heaven, I'll look down on you, so come now, don't feel lonely."
[chorus]
One more morning, a whole new day.
I close my eyes and do not know what to say.
Doesn't matter how much you say you love me,
you know I love you too.
Girl, you colour my day, by simply looking my way,
but there's one more thing I should do..
How could I ever know that I'd fall this low?
It's harder to get up with those depressions on the go.
See my life flashin' for my eyes, I have tickets for the first row.
Still no one's ever listening when I flick spits on my flow.
So I'll retake it slow.
Give people a preview and invite them to my show.
And my show is the game,
I'm so tired of always being the first one to blame.
But if granda could keep on fighting, then maybe I should do the same..
One more and I would drown in this world where I am trippin'.
My friends ignore me and formed a group where I don't fit in.
So tired of waitin' for those damn pills to kick in.
My mama doesn't know me,
my father lost his homie.
My shawty turned her back isn't there anymore to hold me.
Slowly, I wipe my tears and think 'bout what my grandma told me.
"From heaven, I'll look down on you, so come now, don't feel lonely."
[chorus]
One more morning, a whole new day.
I close my eyes and do not know what to say.
Doesn't matter how much you say you love me,
you know I love you too.
Girl, you colour my day, by simply looking my way,
but there's one more thing I should do..
How could I ever know that I'd fall this low?
It's harder to get up with those depressions on the go.
See my life flashin' for my eyes, I have tickets for the first row.
Still no one's ever listening when I flick spits on my flow.
So I'll retake it slow.
Give people a preview and invite them to my show.
And my show is the game,
I'm so tired of always being the first one to blame.
But if granda could keep on fighting, then maybe I should do the same..
This still isn't finished.
I just wanted to hear a personal opinion.
Thanks in advance.