Tech Solider

[AceInfinity]

Light source, perspective, and creativity are fairly good. Need to work on those purple spots like Untouch had mentioned, they should be a dark blue or a lighter blue depending on what you want it to look like. If you make them lighter, it will draw more attention to that area. So think about the sub focal points, and the main focal point that you want the viewer to look at when you modify this.