12-20-2010, 11:16 AM
The second song sounds great man!
However, in the first one it sounds like your gobbling some of your words if that makes sense. like you're biting your tongue trying to get them out. I think you can fix that by working on your flow a little but apart from that they're both great!
However, in the first one it sounds like your gobbling some of your words if that makes sense. like you're biting your tongue trying to get them out. I think you can fix that by working on your flow a little but apart from that they're both great!