12-13-2010, 04:30 PM
Show, don't tell.
get rid of dead passive verbs and it would be great.
get rid of dead passive verbs and it would be great.
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Story I was working on.
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Story I was working on. - by Cobalt - 12-12-2010, 06:57 PM
RE: Story I was working on. - by Marvel - 12-12-2010, 07:05 PM
RE: Story I was working on. - by Cobalt - 12-12-2010, 07:06 PM
RE: Story I was working on. - by Dragoon0309 - 12-13-2010, 04:30 PM
RE: Story I was working on. - by gilzar - 12-13-2010, 10:26 PM
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