12-13-2010, 07:20 AM
Not sure what I think about this to be honest.
The texture of the background looks really nice as do the colours but the main focal image needs a lot of work.
Not very keen on the ribbon brushes you've used, they kind of distract you from the whole image.
Text looks really nice and the lighting works very well. I just feel there should be something going on in the main image.
I think with big images like this, there needs to be a reason behind what you've done, and it should be fairly obvious to anybody that looks at it. I can't think of what you were trying to achieve here.
The title heaven does link with the tropical beach, but it needs to look more heavenly, because at the minute, your colour scheme makes me think water, when I probably should be thinking sun & sand.
Sorry If I've came across as slightly harsh, but I know that you can do a lot better with it! Technically, it's a very good image, blending, lighting, etc.. but I feel you need to have a rethink about what message you're actually trying to get across.
The texture of the background looks really nice as do the colours but the main focal image needs a lot of work.
Not very keen on the ribbon brushes you've used, they kind of distract you from the whole image.
Text looks really nice and the lighting works very well. I just feel there should be something going on in the main image.
I think with big images like this, there needs to be a reason behind what you've done, and it should be fairly obvious to anybody that looks at it. I can't think of what you were trying to achieve here.
The title heaven does link with the tropical beach, but it needs to look more heavenly, because at the minute, your colour scheme makes me think water, when I probably should be thinking sun & sand.
Sorry If I've came across as slightly harsh, but I know that you can do a lot better with it! Technically, it's a very good image, blending, lighting, etc.. but I feel you need to have a rethink about what message you're actually trying to get across.