Need some help on my report ideas+ grammar

[Resting Sonata]

It seems like an obvious observation but to many it gets over-looked. When you say the word "school", what comes into your mind? Do you see a building, books, teachers, papers and grades? Seems pretty innocent, right? Wrong.

By anyone's standards,schools are some of the most disgustingly oprressive institutions of America. Think about what school really is. You MUST get there at a certain time, even a minute late and you'll be in trouble. Your day is completly planned out, right to what you will eat and when you will eat it. You are to be monitored at all times and you must follow the rules to the dot- or else you'll have hell to pay.

You have your superiors, who have complete control over you and determine what is right and what is wrong. The social system is based off the medieval cast system where you "enter" a certain group and will remain there until said otherwise. Also you have you dictator at the top, principle, that has the most power over you then any other person you will ever meet. They have complete control over your entire future and will determine how you will spend it (eg. if you will go to college, which college, etc).

Every aspect of your life is either controlled or monitored by them. The only other place I can think of being more controlling and oppressive than this is the Nazi camps. This is just the surface of what school really is. Let's go more in depth with this corrupt system of education.

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