11-04-2010, 12:03 PM
Doesn't look that good.
You need to do something else with the text at the bottom rather than just putting it ontop of the background.
The main bar in middle looks odd. Maybe blur it slightly and delete the bar where it goes over the text.
Could make the colours more brighter or something, they are looking kind of dull.
With a bit of work it may end up good.
You need to do something else with the text at the bottom rather than just putting it ontop of the background.
The main bar in middle looks odd. Maybe blur it slightly and delete the bar where it goes over the text.
Could make the colours more brighter or something, they are looking kind of dull.
With a bit of work it may end up good.