10-03-2010, 03:59 AM
Unfortunately I don't like it at all.
First scale it down to an appropriate size.
Put an appropriate background in.
Some of the pen tooling is too big and goes the wrong direction from the flow.
Looks stupid with the colours on his face and body.
Finally text placement is bad.
First scale it down to an appropriate size.
Put an appropriate background in.
Some of the pen tooling is too big and goes the wrong direction from the flow.
Looks stupid with the colours on his face and body.
Finally text placement is bad.
![[Image: burninglove4.png]](http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/5273/burninglove4.png)