10-02-2010, 11:24 AM
I'll CnC your current signature.
The stock is to small, there is too much space around it.
I don't see a light source and the stock is hidden behind the colour overlay meaning there is very little depth.
The text is badly positioned. It would look better if it was hanging just above the left shoulder and overlapping his neck slightly.
The light effects are too thick. I like them but you should keep them thinner (like the smaller parts you've added).
Also it could probably do with a border. Because of the colour gradient, it may look nice with a transparent border.
At the moment I rate it 6/10 but it has potential so keep working on it.
The stock is to small, there is too much space around it.
I don't see a light source and the stock is hidden behind the colour overlay meaning there is very little depth.
The text is badly positioned. It would look better if it was hanging just above the left shoulder and overlapping his neck slightly.
The light effects are too thick. I like them but you should keep them thinner (like the smaller parts you've added).
Also it could probably do with a border. Because of the colour gradient, it may look nice with a transparent border.
At the moment I rate it 6/10 but it has potential so keep working on it.