09-27-2010, 11:47 AM
Sorry don't like this one. 
The c4ds are badly placed and don't add to the flow at all. Maybe if you toned them done it could look better and add c4ds which add to the flow such as your first version. Although that c4d in the 1st version looks bad and you used the wrong colour.
I really wish you would stop doing that same text because it's bad and looks out of place.
I see you tried to add some depth but you should work on adding more.
Other than that the render does blend in nicely. 6/10 no where near your best.
The c4ds are badly placed and don't add to the flow at all. Maybe if you toned them done it could look better and add c4ds which add to the flow such as your first version. Although that c4d in the 1st version looks bad and you used the wrong colour.
I really wish you would stop doing that same text because it's bad and looks out of place.
I see you tried to add some depth but you should work on adding more.
Other than that the render does blend in nicely. 6/10 no where near your best.
![[Image: burninglove4.png]](http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/5273/burninglove4.png)