Krazi [updated]

[Skill]

I'm not an expert when it comes to graphics but here's what I think:

• The render looks out of place.
  
• The text doesn't match the signature, or at least doesn't go with the flow.
  
• The colours are fine, but the background looks a little messy.

I don't intend to hurt your feelings, that's not why I'm replying. I want to give you my honest views, disregarding the fact that you're a friend.

Did you follow a tutorial? If so, try a different one. This style isn't good and it's not giving you chance to explore graphics to its full potential. You have the ability to become a great graphics artist but you need the right resources. Look into different tutorials and see which you can use and expand on. Practice makes perfect, always remember that.