10-11-2009, 02:10 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-11-2009, 02:10 PM by Conspiracy.)
Well, Firstly the lighting is non-existant, there's no obvious flow... bad depth, Is the man the focal or the spear? You haven't made that clear; the red dots are tacky ( A pentool stroked with outerglow would be better) overall it's ok but you'd be raped on a graphics forum.