09-02-2010, 11:48 AM
First:
The image looks a little distorted. (Did you stretch it?).
The text to the left doesn't fit with the rest of the image.
The white line looks bizarre and overall the blending of colours could be improved.
I quite like the colour scheme & the font used though.
Second:
Again the blending needs a lot of work.
It could do with some text to make it more of a complete image.
The right side of the image looks stretched and the images of the planets look very low quality.
The lines coming off the renders hand spoil it. Although if done better, could improve the image as a whole.
I like the render you have used, I like the idea you have gone for, and I think the left side of the signature has been done very well.
The image looks a little distorted. (Did you stretch it?).
The text to the left doesn't fit with the rest of the image.
The white line looks bizarre and overall the blending of colours could be improved.
I quite like the colour scheme & the font used though.
Second:
Again the blending needs a lot of work.
It could do with some text to make it more of a complete image.
The right side of the image looks stretched and the images of the planets look very low quality.
The lines coming off the renders hand spoil it. Although if done better, could improve the image as a whole.
I like the render you have used, I like the idea you have gone for, and I think the left side of the signature has been done very well.