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[S0rath 0f the Black Sun]

Great feedback man. Well all the samples were produced from scratch, I did not use any loops.

The second one was produced with my friend, I did all of the technical work on it.

Cool. I use a little drum machine program or we go out recording sounds on the street or clips from the net or anime and mix and match and loop to form a baseline beat and layer-on some more tracks so that it has a basic pattern kinda like this:

4 to 8 bar/beat intro
4 bar/beat chorus
4 to 8 bar/beat refrain
4 bar/beat chorus
8 bar/beat bridge
8 bar/beat refrain
8 bar/beat chorus
2 to 4 bar/beat outro

Or something similar (I mostly remix it before we add our vocals). depending on the beat speed, that pattern would sum up to about 3-4mins (80-90bpm) or 6-7min (60-80bpm) or 2-3mins (100-110bpm).

I might also share my own tracks here soon after we're done with recording the last few vocals.

Update us on your progress?