08-06-2010, 11:54 AM
As nobody gives any criticism i will do it 
I like it but you could do the following,
Add Stroke to the background(Inside) and put the size of the Stroke to 1px-2px maxiumum, and it should be black color. You also could do some more things on it like putting a C4D on it or so, some sharpeing & bluring won't kill you, You also could try smudging you can search for a tutorial how to smudge here on or on Google. Text should look more simple and professional, the opacity could be a bit lowered, like at 90% or so, at the end i would say you could put Diagonalic scan lines and put the opacity of them to 4-12%.
Hope you likit my criticism. If you wonder why my signature is sucky because i was bored and maked something random fast.
~ Simba1337
I like it but you could do the following,
Add Stroke to the background(Inside) and put the size of the Stroke to 1px-2px maxiumum, and it should be black color. You also could do some more things on it like putting a C4D on it or so, some sharpeing & bluring won't kill you, You also could try smudging you can search for a tutorial how to smudge here on or on Google. Text should look more simple and professional, the opacity could be a bit lowered, like at 90% or so, at the end i would say you could put Diagonalic scan lines and put the opacity of them to 4-12%.
Hope you likit my criticism. If you wonder why my signature is sucky because i was bored and maked something random fast.
~ Simba1337
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