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#21
11-26-2011, 08:47 PM
Pretty cool, very creative ideas.
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#22
12-03-2011, 11:56 AM
(11-26-2011, 11:45 AM)sean4430 Wrote:
I like it, is this a true verse? or just something u randomly came up with in ur mind?


Yes, its true.

I was arrested 3 weeks after my girls dad commited suicide, i went to DYS(Google it ) for 11 months. When i was arrested, i got arrested 4 days before my freshman year was out, and lost all credits, which forced me to get my GED, i scored in the upper 3000's (4000 is the most you can get). Scoring that, i recieved the highest score my state has ever seen on the math section on the GED.

After that i went to college. I dropped out of college 3 weeks ago.
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#23
12-03-2011, 01:12 PM
It seems that when you were writing this you were angry or sad.
I hope that isn't the same way now o:
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#24
12-04-2011, 04:33 PM
This seems very dark but it is well written and has good quality.
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#25
12-05-2011, 09:22 AM
(12-03-2011, 11:56 AM)Synn Wrote: Yes, its true.

I was arrested 3 weeks after my girls dad commited suicide, i went to DYS(Google it ) for 11 months. When i was arrested, i got arrested 4 days before my freshman year was out, and lost all credits, which forced me to get my GED, i scored in the upper 3000's (4000 is the most you can get). Scoring that, i recieved the highest score my state has ever seen on the math section on the GED.

After that i went to college. I dropped out of college 3 weeks ago.

You proved to everyone that despite everything you could still do something. You went and got your GED. Why'd you drop out?
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