Poem/Rap

[Synn]

Something i wrote a while back.

I wanted to run it by you for when i got out;
Grab my wallet, my license, and head on out.
I could drive to Illinois, or bitch out my dad;
Life as I've been living is way too damn sad.
My girl just about lost her mind,
Two weeks before, her dad committed suicide.
The funeral was the very next day,
I couldn't go, I went insane.

I was lost, in what I had done;
Gone, reborn, remade.

Now I'm in college;
It's all spiraling downwards;
Only hope I see is to give up.

Its a dark hole;
One I've been in many times;
I look down, and it seems more appealing than up.
Dug a little deeper, here I am.

Got back into some old crap;
Now im too far gone.






Tell me what you think, if you are just wanting to be a pain, or a troll, keep it off this thread please.

[Muted]

i like it, creative, and has some potenial perhaps maybe you could sing it?

[Party]

I like it. Try singing it, and if you can make that good, then you got yourself a talent.

[sam4]

I like it , it seems to be creative , keep it up !!

[Zombot]

Very nice poem OP. It's very creative and I hope to see more from you. Good luck!

[Sql]

Very nice poem OP. It's very creative and I hope to see more from you. Good luck!

Well i dont like it.

I like it , it seems to be creative , keep it up !!

This isn't creative at all

[Zombot]

Well i dont like it.

I like it , it seems to be creative , keep it up !!

This isn't creative at all

It's your own opinion, nobody gives a fudge okay?

[Synn]

Well i dont like it.

I like it , it seems to be creative , keep it up !!

This isn't creative at all

Took me a second to find out what your problem with me was. Then your name rung a bell.

http://www.supportforums.net/showthread.php?tid=22590

Mr. 13 posts, in 1 week is now at 107. Someones trying REALLY hard for that support feather award!

But honestly, no one likes that, its extremely counter productive to the award.

[Criteria]

It's decent, I like it, good job.

[Contribution]

Cool poem OP.
Now all you need to do is get a youtube account and record yourself singing it.