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Hold My Hand - Curtiie Boii
#1
Well this song isn't really about anything, it just what i was writing from the top of my head. Please can you all give your feed back on this, i don't mind if its CnC (Constructive N Criticism) post as all post will help me.

Please honest thoughts.



Hold My Hand



The life don’t last forever
So make sure you’re always there
Because we can be together
We know that this world isn’t forever
So you can just promise me



Oh… You can just promise me
Your always gonna be there
See, we don’t need any more broken hearts
We are helpless now our family’s apart
So maybe you can just



Hold my hand… Oh.
Hold my hand
Oh….. We not leavers
Because we are believers
So just hold my hand



You know one day this life will turn around
Its only one time an once chance to live this down
Oh… It’s only a matter of time
The sun has to go down every day
So maybe you can just



Hold my hand… Oh.
Hold my hand
Oh….. We not leavers
Because we are believers
So just hold my hand



Come to me and we can make it alright
Maybe this can go away in the morning
But you just got to…..
Hold my hand
Oh… Please just
Hold my hand



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#2
Not bad OP, well written.
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HF- Witness
GT- i be Witness
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#3
I was actually singing this, was pretty good and I actually liked it, hopefully you can make some more songs!
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#4
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Curtiie-Bo...7611567930

Thats my page please like it =]
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#5
Pretty nice OP, have you got a recorded song to it?
Yeah, simple. I've got a hundred thousand on me I could sprinkle!

Tiny Tempah ;)
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#6
All recorded songs are on CD..

(06-03-2011, 02:33 PM)Richie Wrote: Pretty nice OP, have you got a recorded song to it?

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(06-03-2011, 06:39 PM)Anon Wrote: All recorded songs are on CD..


What do you mean on CD? I mean have you sung it with a backing track or whatever?
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#8
Yeah i am going to a studio and recording it too a CD, that is how i do my music bro my back play the guitar we record him. After him we will record me singing over the top, then mix and match it together. and Woooo La =]

I wanna try start singing like live and crap ay...
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#9
I liked this, only because it rhymed in parts. xD

Good work, though.
Lyrics are nice.
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#10
Nice song I am checking out your page right now on face book.
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