05-14-2011, 05:26 PM
The clouds could have more colour.
The damage to the building on the left looks bad (part beside name), just looks out of place and wrong.
You need give that part more depth too, the damage looks as though it's floating.
The tree in the middle is badly done, i'm not sure what you were trying to do with that. I can see part of the building below the tree and grass and the grass just stops in a straight line on the building?
Building on the right needs burned much more.
In a whole it looks good but there is a lot of work needed. Good job.
The damage to the building on the left looks bad (part beside name), just looks out of place and wrong.
You need give that part more depth too, the damage looks as though it's floating.
The tree in the middle is badly done, i'm not sure what you were trying to do with that. I can see part of the building below the tree and grass and the grass just stops in a straight line on the building?
Building on the right needs burned much more.
In a whole it looks good but there is a lot of work needed. Good job.