My Grandmother - RIP

[Sam]

I made this, for my grandmother who recently passed away. I will forever miss her and I wrote this simple but meaningful poem to honor her.

My Grandmother

You sit so deeply down within my heart,
the pain you cause me, us being apart.

Your warmth, your kindness, the tenderness care,
it's never to return and that I can't bare.

I'll miss you forever, I'll miss your advice,
your smile and your laughter, simply so nice.

But, I must conclude and I must accept,
that you are gone for ever, but with my endless respect.

[Psychosis]

I like it, good job sam.

[Sam]

Thanks, it's simple but it sums up feelings.

[Lobain]

Good work on that. Sorry for your loss man.

[JasonMandela]

Thats some sad crap man (As in its actually sad..), Sorry to hear it but some thoughtful text went into that (Y)

[Sam]

Thanks for your words, everyone.

[JasonMandela]

No probs, you look like a good guy anyway. 1.6k posts and you joined this month, You shitting me?

[Sam]

No, last year.

[Sam]

Would appreciate some further feedback, comments.

[Skill]

We've all lost loved ones at least once in our lives and it is not a pleasant experience. Not many can put their emotions to words like you have; I praise you for that. Whilst reading your poem I felt the emotion and could tell just how much your Grandmother meant to you. The tears we cry are for the loss of our loved ones and nothing will ever take their memories away from us.