03-05-2012, 07:24 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:47 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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03-05-2012, 07:24 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:47 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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03-07-2012, 06:02 AM
Good poem, I like it.
I'm starting to enjoy browsing and reading poems by Support Forums members, lol. How long did this take you to write? Btw, I think you mean 'apart', not 'appart', unless it's intentional.
03-08-2012, 12:51 PM
That is good, try to expand on it!
It takes time to write a good poem. Just, try to make this about three stanzas.
03-08-2012, 01:43 PM
It doesn't make much sense to me, and you should also try adding to it. Maybe add in a few more verses.
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