Read more?

[Miku]

I'm doing a saturation report. So just tell me do you want to read more after read the passage below. Thanks. It worth a lot of points. And maybe tell me how to improve if you can.


In a room, a person is sitting in front of his computer. There are terminals on one of his screen and a webpage on the other. He looks at one screen for a few minutes and a few minutes on the other. He is the administrator of his hacking community.
In the last hundred years, teenagers and media had corrupted the term – hacker. People who use the term to describe the improvement of something are disappointed. In this report, I’m going to tell you how the white hats think.

[Locke]

This is terribly uninteresting.

The language is so...dry.

[Nympho]

Not so understandable. There is a few sense, but... It has to be improved.
5/10

[Miku]

so how I can improve?

[Locke]

Writing is something that comes naturally, I can't really imagine someone learning from some esoteric source and making something entertaining.

[Invincible]

Writing is something that comes naturally, I can't really imagine someone learning from some esoteric source and making something entertaining.

That, but i really believe that one can improve his/her writing by reading other authors. I.E Reading novel(s) will get surely get you an idea about novel writing.

[G0dfath3r]

I think creativity plays major role in writting,You can improve your writting skills by reading and practicing.I would appreciate your work because atleast you had tried tn write something extraoridinary.