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[Poem] Fate, Intertwined
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05-17-2011, 02:48 PM
It's actually good. Needs more diversity though.
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05-18-2011, 10:56 AM
(05-17-2011, 10:20 AM)Invincible Wrote: I love the way you lie.

(05-17-2011, 05:49 AM)Telhast Wrote: Great poem. Perfectly rhymed with sleek verses.
@BlackChaos - BTW, hows your girlfriend ?

i am his Girlfriend Ujellybro?

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(05-17-2011, 02:48 PM)Deism Wrote: It's actually good. Needs more diversity though.

Thanks mate Smile
If you want diversity, check out my other works.
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05-19-2011, 09:17 PM
great poem! this stuff is good!
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