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Syringe™ Offline
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02-02-2011, 01:53 PM
Well, i'm starting a new forum and thought i'd make a banner for it. Remember, it's not finished! Too much neg space, what do you think so far?
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02-02-2011, 03:50 PM
It's alright but you can barely see the pulse, and syringe part.
The smudging is a bit random though. Tongue
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02-02-2011, 06:45 PM
The t and the i (I think?) looks a bit smudged together. Try putting some space?

Very impressive though.
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02-02-2011, 06:52 PM
it is ok but yeah, the letters could be better
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02-03-2011, 03:40 PM
It does look good, I can't wait to see the final outcome as currently the smudging looks too spastic.
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02-03-2011, 09:22 PM (This post was last modified: 02-03-2011, 09:22 PM by AceInfinity.)
Both circles have a flat part at the top, and the smudging is alright, but too random as Untouch has said. I usually have to start a debate with him since we do different styles of GFX which require a different approach, but I actually agree with him on this one for once lol Blackhat

The effect is nice, but the canvas is also too empty, and is a weird size and dimension.
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#7
02-03-2011, 10:38 PM
Infinity, thanks. As i said it's WIP - nothing ready yet.
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#8
02-04-2011, 12:46 AM
Blending between the smudge and your text and renders is pretty bad.
Fix that, also fill up more space.
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02-10-2011, 02:39 AM
It looks alright, but there's a little too much extra open space in my opinion =\
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