Something I am writing for my English homework.

[Ally Mac]

Or i can force you.

@On Topic: Nice text. Do the rest!

I really need someone to force me.

~A

[Logan]

Sound good so far keep it up!

[Ally Mac]

Sound good so far keep it up!

Thank you, young sir.

~A

[Vish]

Nice one mate. When you gonna finish it though.

[killerpop89]

Hmm state of fear I read it just now its not bad but, make sure that the conclusion is a apparel of all the Paragraphs.

[Ally Mac]

Hmm state of fear I read it just now its not bad but, make sure that the conclusion is a apparel of all the Paragraphs.

I think you have replied in the wrong topic.

~A
E:/
No, I posted in the wrong topic, facepalm!

Anyways, I thought state of fear was amazing!

---

Nice one mate. When you gonna finish it though.

Soon, hopefully!

~A

[Swift Swim]

I read the first bit and stopped;;
Although the book is in some sense "geeky" or "highly intellectual" it covers some very important aspects, in a very bizarre way, the author, Michael Crichton, has turned, ingeniously, an "informative book" into a fast paced thriller, a very interesting read.

One sentence? Sure, complex sentences give you brownie points, but you need to structure it a lot better.

[Ally Mac]

I read the first bit and stopped;;
Although the book is in some sense "geeky" or "highly intellectual" it covers some very important aspects, in a very bizarre way, the author. Michael Crichton, has turned, ingeniously, an "informative book" into a fast paced thriller, a very interesting read.

One sentence? Sure, complex sentences give you brownie points, but you need to structure it a lot better.

I'm confused.

Although the book is in some sense "geeky" or "highly intellectual"

Because it isn't literally intellectual, it is in-adamant.

, in a very bizarre way, the author,

Comma's are around it because that part isn't necessary to be there, the sentence will make sense without it, so comma's are required.

the author, Michael Crichton

Changed the comma to a Fullstop.

has turned, ingeniously

Is required, but ingeniously is not. Commas are required.


~A