Suicide Line --- NOT FINISHED

[Curtiie]

Hey SF,

Just writing a new song and wondering if you can give your thought to me please, remember that this song has not been finished yet. Just give it a rating out of 10 and some CnC (Constructive and criticizim).


What have I done, is this the end
Was this pretend, or reality
It’s never gonna be the same
I’ve been through it all, up and downs
But what comes around goes around

Feel free, but its never gonna be the same
Now your gone, I realize I was wrong
Never ever gonna be strong again
This world if out of my hands
But tonight I’m throwing it all in

It’s on a suicide line,
My life’s on a suicide line
Tomorrows the end
The end is here
It’s on a suicide line

Nothing I do, nothing you do
But that one thing, will change my life


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[-Infectious]

I don't know what to say :3
This is good(:

[Curtiie]

I don't know what to say :3
This is good(:

Thank you this are not the only songs that I have wrote.

Well started writing.

[-Infectious]

Thank you this are not the only songs that I have wrote.

Well started writing.

You should post more! We would be glad to see them(:

[Curtiie]

Many people would have already seem them as I posted them on my other account Anon, but then the account was hacked therefor I made a new account cause Omni has not done anything about it. If you still would like me to post there I would be happy to =]

[-Infectious]

Many people would have already seem them as I posted them on my other account Anon, but then the account was hacked therefor I made a new account cause Omni has not done anything about it. If you still would like me to post there I would be happy to =]

Please do!(:
And sorry to hear about your account

[Curtiie]

Please do!(:
And sorry to hear about your account

There up bro, just check in this forums section.

[-Infectious]

There up bro, just check in this forums section.

Very nice, read them all, loved them all(: I read them and then posted(:

[Fruitella]

@OP
POST MOAR NOW SO I CAN READ!