Outta this world

[C4Vendetta]

I saw a tutorial for this kind of thing ages ago, but I couldn't do it because I didn't have C4D. And this is about the first thing I did with C4D, I didn't actually sue the tutorial but just used that what I could still remember as inspiration.

Did it in about 20 minutes so don't expect too much.

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[Untouch]

I don't think the background and text go well.
The text itself is good and I like the texture you added to it.
It looks more suited to a jungle or forest maybe?

[Fragma]

I agree with Untouch here.

Also it looks kinda flat. You should work on the lighting a lot more.

[PhiLLy BR]

I think the text being a bit brighter would have made it. Other then that good work.