Bored. So I wrote a Rap.

[SleepyTroll]

This flow is defective
some call me detective
cuz when i pat down ya girl
her thighs be extra restless
so please do not mess with
you must have a death wish
I'm here to serve it up
Just like that waitress
I just fudged that bitch
now on to the next with
a super reckless raw dish
no condom on my dick
yo kid might be my kid
yo girl call me daddy
you lay it down badly
while i beat it up gladly

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g1uZqBZA0Hc

From 0:15 - 0:40

[Deltron]

Greatest line evar.

"cuz when i pat down ya girl her thighs be extra restless"

[RRain]

hhahah that is pretty funny, i like the last few lines the best

[Fragma]

Words are well put together, but the stuff you're actually saying makes it rubbish.

All the big rappers write about life experiences, and stuff that actually has meaning.

All the not so big rappers write about girls in a disrespectful way like you have just done.

[SleepyTroll]

Words are well put together, but the stuff you're actually saying makes it rubbish.

All the big rappers write about life experiences, and stuff that actually has meaning.

All the not so big rappers write about girls in a disrespectful way like you have just done.

Was for fun sirr had nothing to do lmao XD

Plus I've lived a good life got nothing to say really =\

[JohnRonder]

Hehe pretty good rap there ;) Good Job!

[AceInfinity]

The main rap over top of it from the guy who made the beat is insane. It sounds pretty good.

I suppose you could make yours work too though with the right tone and rhythm.

[Apex]

That's some good lyrics there! Keep up writing great raps and you might become a famous someday.

[Melted oreo]

Great rap, I wish i could write.

[Step Up 3™]

Nice rap rhyme mate!