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Our first action movie/short
#1
Well, yesterday we (me, my brother, and 2 of our friends) filmed and edited our first action movie.

Enjoy, be sure to leave a nice comment Smile

Oh and there was some editing mistakes, so just ignore them. Next movie will include better sound effects/blood/muzzle flashes.

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#2
I like it. Keep it up and you'll be very popular on youtube trust me.
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#3
Few things to work on.

- Gun holding, you have to learn how to actually hold guns.
- Fight scenes, make em more real and add some sounds.
- How did somebody get hit with a gun, pretended to be dead and then moved like he never been hit lol.
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#4
Yep i like it. Keep it up.
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(09-08-2010, 01:14 AM)NekoChan Wrote: Few things to work on.

- Gun holding, you have to learn how to actually hold guns.
- Fight scenes, make em more real and add some sounds.
- How did somebody get hit with a gun, pretended to be dead and then moved like he never been hit lol.

also dont wear purple shoes lol!.
also watch theses
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#6
That was actually not too bad. I enjoyed it Tongue
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#7
Was pretty good for a first try.

I think the ginger should wear a mask or something as it distracts the viewer...
Also, the way you held the guns was poor. No one holds a gun like that.
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#8
Yeah sorry guys I was banned, and my flaming red hair is freakin distracting Big Grin but thanks for the positive feedback, we got action essentials and are making a new better video this weekend, it shall be sick!
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#9
It wasn't very realistic Tongue
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