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[DeFacto]

C&C

some corrections:

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[bkotz]

i feel theres 2 much empty space at the top
i like the render u chose
text is good but it doesnt blend well enuff
use the orange from her shirt maybe?

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u still owe me a sig O_O lol

[Untouch]

I like it but you should crop some of the top of, to maybe make it 150 x 350 or 300.
I think there is too much of the lighting on the left.
Also don't really like the text or it's placement although deciding where to place the text would be hard for a picture like yours.
I give it 7.5 /10