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#1
08-14-2011, 02:04 AM
Move On

I know that times are hard enough
Let alone with all the stuff that goes on
You just gotta stay here hold on through
Stay here hold on strong
Careful now this world is fragile

Oh.. I know his gone but that’s not forever
Common girl just bring up that beautiful smile
Oh.. Remember theirs no no giving up NOT EVER
This world may end but his heart is always there
But what do you do

Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on

It’s like my heart in battle with your head
Two different things are in your mind
You’ve gotta play it right one on one there is no sides
Because one wrong step and this life
This life can break down in two

Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on

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#2
08-14-2011, 02:11 AM
I really like this!
Keep writing bud(:
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08-15-2011, 01:40 PM
(08-14-2011, 02:11 AM)Emotional™ Wrote: I really like this!
Keep writing bud(:

Stop saying what I'm thinking!! Huh
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08-15-2011, 03:20 PM
Wow, I really liked this tbh.

Keep writing I want to see more!
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08-15-2011, 08:54 PM
(08-14-2011, 02:04 AM)Curtiie Wrote: Move On

I know that times are hard enough
Let alone with all the stuff that goes on
You just gotta stay here hold on through
Stay here hold on strong
Careful now this world is fragile

Oh.. I know his gone but that’s not forever
Common girl just bring up that beautiful smile
Oh.. Remember theirs no no giving up NOT EVER
This world may end but his heart is always there
But what do you do

Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on

It’s like my heart in battle with your head
Two different things are in your mind
You’ve gotta play it right one on one there is no sides
Because one wrong step and this life
This life can break down in two

Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on

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This is nice man i really like it. What is your inspiration to write?

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#6
08-15-2011, 09:50 PM
My life back when i was 13/16 i was involved in the wrong crew and gang lines, i know i had to do something to get my mind off it all so i did this.
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