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RedactedRedacted - fuck_prohibition - 03-05-2012 Redacted Redacted Redacted Redacted Redacted Redacted RE: C&C Verse - Starbreak - 03-07-2012 Good poem, I like it. I'm starting to enjoy browsing and reading poems by Support Forums members, lol. How long did this take you to write? Btw, I think you mean 'apart', not 'appart', unless it's intentional. RE: C&C Verse - Winterâ„¢ - 03-08-2012 That is good, try to expand on it! It takes time to write a good poem. Just, try to make this about three stanzas. RE: C&C Verse - BreShiE - 03-08-2012 It doesn't make much sense to me, and you should also try adding to it. Maybe add in a few more verses. |