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Poem - Infinity - 11-30-2011
So normally I don't share what I write, after I write it I find that I don't really like it >_< but here goes:
I'm sitting here running
Running from emotions, running from the pain
But what is there to gain?
I'm always running, no stopping, no slowing down
Can't let the pain catch up gotta get some distance
I always smile, never let them see they got me down, never frown
People saying that they care, do they lie, should I keep my resistance
Should I be me, should I be a clone
Lying to everyone, never let them get close, never let them see the real me
All this lying, lying here, lying there, lying is something we just don't condone
What happens if I tell the truth, stopping all my running, let them stop the chase
I'm getting tired, tired of all my lies, tired of all my pain, the emotions flaring up everywhere
What is there to gain with this sill race
I'm done running, done hiding, now that I stopped I see clearly
I need to be truthful before it is no friends here no friends there
I hope its not late for the friends I held dearly
And this was where I stopped and got stuck lol
RE: Poem - Jinu - 12-01-2011
nice one really awesome.....keep it up
RE: Poem - 0verdose - 12-01-2011
Sounds like it's going to be great.
You should be a song writer.
RE: Poem - Shutdown™ - 12-01-2011
This one is fantastic.
I'm so jelly of people who can write like this. 3:
RE: Poem - D Generation X - 12-01-2011
Very N1ce poem really. ^_^
Keep it up dude!
RE: Poem - Infinity - 12-01-2011
(12-01-2011, 09:08 AM)Shutdown™ Wrote: This one is fantastic.
I'm so jelly of people who can write like this. 3:
This was a spur of the moment thing in class. I usually just trash everything lol
RE: Poem - WTC - 12-01-2011
Seems deep and real. I like it. how long did it take you to come up with it?
RE: Poem - Infinity - 12-01-2011
Hmmm maybe about an hour and that was with editing and things.
RE: Poem - Shutdown™ - 12-01-2011
(12-01-2011, 05:08 PM)Infinity Wrote: Hmmm maybe about an hour and that was with editing and things.
DAMN I'm so jelly.
This would take me so long to try and come up with. D:
RE: Poem - Infinity - 12-01-2011
Well it's not really finished yet either I don't think. So that could be why. I just don't know where to go next with it so I'm just thinking on it.