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[Poem] Tribute - BlackChaos - 07-02-2011
When I was lonely, no one cared,
They discarded me, regarded me like a worn out old shoe
But you were different.
You saw past your indifference
And we realized we aren't so different
We both sing our melodies to the same tune
Our destiny's intertwine, we both share a bloodline
To care for ourselves and people who need us the most
But you gave up too much
Left no love for yourself
So now you're gone and I'm left,
With nothingness inside in my chest
I'm bleeding my heart out for you
I'm crying my eyes out for you
You were the only one who knew me
For you my feelings true
But you gave me not a cent of patience
And its tearing out my conscience in two
Because unconsciously I'm wishing for you to stay too
I'd blow my brains out
I'd do anything for you
No one could ever know me as well as you do
My nights wind away to days thinking about you
If I could have a moment in silence,
I'd pray to God, yes I would
To take my life instead of yours, because my life is you
You're the one who took me under your wing
Protected me till I was ready and out the cage I flew
If I didn't know better,
I'd always turn towards you.
You have the accolades of kindness, wisdom and truth,
This me paying homage to every thing that you do.
The bright light on my horizon,
The sun on my side,
That little voice inside of me that always knows what is right.
Author's Note: Definitely an emotional poem. Don't remember much about why or how I wrote, but that I felt something strong within me when I did. Hope you all like it.
RE: [Poem] Tribute - RAT - 07-03-2011
Were you meaning to rhyme or was it free verse? Either way it's a really good poem just want to see what type.
I say this because some of the lines end in the same word.
RE: [Poem] Tribute - Metapod - 07-04-2011
Was this a tribute to your mother?
Great poem, I loved it and I felt the emotion through it. 10/10
RE: [Poem] Tribute - Ted Bundy - 07-04-2011
Very very nice man seems like you have a good heart...but what is it a tribute to or whom
RE: [Poem] Tribute - BlackChaos - 07-08-2011
(07-03-2011, 04:59 AM)Remorse Wrote: Were you meaning to rhyme or was it free verse? Either way it's a really good poem just want to see what type.
I say this because some of the lines end in the same word.
Originally it was supposed to rhyme, but I felt too restricted and turned it to free verse.
(07-04-2011, 10:48 AM)Veryx Wrote: Was this a tribute to your mother?
Great poem, I loved it and I felt the emotion through it. 10/10
(07-04-2011, 10:51 AM)Ted Bundy Wrote: Very very nice man seems like you have a good heart...but what is it a tribute to or whom
Perhaps. I don't exactly remember who I though of when I wrote it, but this poem is dedicated to everyone in my life who has supported me and led down the right path.
RE: [Poem] Tribute - Mayhem - 07-08-2011
A beautiful poem bro, good job. Your a major contributor to this section of the forum. Keep writing poems and keep up the artistic level.
RE: [Poem] Tribute - BlackChaos - 07-17-2011
(07-08-2011, 09:06 AM)Mayhem Wrote: A beautiful poem bro, good job. Your a major contributor to this section of the forum. Keep writing poems and keep up the artistic level.
Aww. Thanks mate.
Glad you liked it.
RE: [Poem] Tribute - Richard Runz - 07-17-2011
Nice poem man, this is something I can really relate to
RE: [Poem] Tribute - Chef - 07-20-2011
Awhh
This was a emotional poem bro and very "meaningful".
Did you write it to your girlfriend or someone special to you?
RE: [Poem] Tribute - BlackChaos - 07-20-2011
(07-20-2011, 11:47 PM)Bad Meets Evil Wrote: Awhh
This was a emotional poem bro and very "meaningful".
Did you write it to your girlfriend or someone special to you?
I wrote it, thinking about a friend actually. Never told him I wrote it for him.