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[Poem] I've Had Enough - BlackChaos - 06-08-2011
Tears fall down my face,
As I think of you tonight.
I don't want to be this way,
But its the only thought I have.
Sometimes I feel the pain,
Again and again as I fall apart.
Nothing could ever feel this way,
Its like you're piercing my young and foolish heart.
If I could turn my back to you,
I would but it would just tear me up inside.
Winter and Spring go side by side,
Like my love and pain.
I don't wanna live that life again,
I want freedom from hurt and spite.
I want to walk on God's terrain,
With a soul, unburdened, carefree and light.
If what it takes to break this curse,
Is to set me ablaze on my shattered glass,
Trust me, I've been through worse.
Just hand me a pen, plated with brass,
And watch as I return to my world,
Paint a masterpiece upon this canvas,
For Winter and Spring go side by side,
Like my love and pain.
Author's Notes: (Refrain inspired by "Let Down" - Dead By Sunrise)
RE: [Poem] I've Had Enough - xMan - 06-08-2011
wow that was deep oO
nice job lol
RE: [Poem] I've Had Enough - Bяian ♪ - 06-08-2011
A bit too sad for my liking, but nonetheless beautifully written, you have talent.
RE: [Poem] I've Had Enough - BlackChaos - 06-08-2011
Whenever I incorporate sadness in my poems, I usually uplift the theme at the end. Here, I decided to keep as is and let the reader feel the hurt and despair I felt when I wrote this.
RE: [Poem] I've Had Enough - Zumog - 06-08-2011
Very nice/sad poem. I wish I could write something as deep as this. But I always give up =(
RE: [Poem] I've Had Enough - BlackChaos - 06-08-2011
This might help
http://www.supportforums.net/showthread.php?tid=18509