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Move On -- By Curtiie Boii - Anon - 06-07-2011
Move On
I know that times are hard enough
Let alone with all the stuff that goes on
You just gotta stay here hold on through
Stay here hold on strong
Careful now this world is fragile
Oh.. I know his gone but that’s not forever
Common girl just bring up that beautiful smile
Oh.. Remember theirs no no giving up NOT EVER
This world may end but his heart is always there
But what do you do
Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on
It’s like my heart in battle with your head
Two different things are in your mind
You’ve gotta play it right one on one there is no sides
Because one wrong step and this life
This life can break down in two
Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on
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RE: Move On -- By Curtiie Boii - Hydrocodone - 06-08-2011
Dang dude you like writeing these songs there pretty good allso! Keep doing what your doing.
RE: Move On -- By Curtiie Boii - BlackChaos - 06-08-2011
Good job on the lyrics mate. They sound great in coordination with each other and the hook/chorus is pretty clean.
Overall, well done. Hope to see more of your works in the Creative Writing section.
RE: Move On -- By Curtiie Boii - Anon - 06-08-2011
Thank you blackchaos i like all the feed back i get from anyone, i just wish that more people would comment so i have more feedback haha.
Thank you
RE: Move On -- By Curtiie Boii - Legacy - 06-27-2011
damn... keep up the good work
RE: Move On -- By Curtiie Boii - Strong - 06-27-2011
Sounds good, if this is a song, i'd love to hear you play it.