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No shooting star - Anon - 05-21-2011
Hello,
I wrote this song for my girlfriend in hoping that she likes it, i would like to share it with use and please put your true thoughts into this.
I know a girl with these beautiful eyes
Whenever i walk by she makes me so happy
It's like i'm living in a whole different world
i know that she will always be there
i am happy to call her my girl
If only there was one day one time
that i could, reach up to the sky i'd
i'd take a star or two down for you baby
ohhh yeah you know its true
just remember that our love
Ohhh Our love didn't come from no shooting star
this is real, this is true baby this is forever
from now and on your not alone noooo
and from that day you've stolen my heart
i know you wil keep it in one part
You are everything that i want
but i just never knew it was needed
You are everything i need
but i just never knew i wanted
everything i say is true baby
Ohhh Our love didn't come from no shooting star
this is real, this is true baby this is forever
from now and on your not alone noooo
and from that day you've stolen my heart
i know you wil keep it in one part
RE: No shooting star - Impulses SF - 05-23-2011
The lyrics are sentimental and touching.
However I would like to hear it in action! Although if she really cares about you, she won't mind if it's terrible.
RE: No shooting star - WhiteFlame - 05-23-2011
Haha, I worte a TERRIBLE poem for my GF and she thought it was really sweet. The moral of the story is to say that you meant every word thats what really matters.
Doesn;t matter how bad it is. In fairness to you this is good so you are bi-winning here. Nice sentiment and nice poem
RE: No shooting star - Anon - 05-23-2011
Thank you white flame i am actually going into the music career, as i will be recording my own album and giving it to her.
RE: No shooting star - BlackChaos - 05-24-2011
This is really good Anon
If you're going into the music business, one piece of advice. Try not to meld over to trending pop cultures. Just stay true to your music.
Good luck
RE: No shooting star - G0dfath3r - 05-27-2011
Pretty impressive mate,I think you have shared lot of thoughts and beautiness of her.I like the way you wrote it,keep doing it and i'm sure she will likes it.
All the best.
RE: No shooting star - Hуѕтєяιa X™ - 05-27-2011
I think this was very well done. Nice going on this, impressive to say the least. I wouldn't mind hearing that being sung, you have a creative mind, hope to see more of your work.
RE: No shooting star - Atthackers - 05-30-2011
Wow! You put a lot of hart into that! Hope your GF likes it!
RE: No shooting star - shopping - 06-01-2011
The lyrics are sentimental and touching.
RE: No shooting star - !LoL - 06-01-2011
Ohhh Our love didn't come from no shooting star
this is real, this is true baby this is forever
from now and on your not alone noooo
and from that day you've stolen my heart
i know you wil keep it in one part