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[Poem] In The Stars - BlackChaos - 04-23-2011
Its pure agony, every step that I take I explode,
Shock trauma, every step I take down the road,
In single file lines, they all hop off the chasm and die,
In blissful sleep I rest, still contemplating my life,
See not the notes or the rhymes, but the dedication and flow,
Let the beat take you up and bring you back down slow,
For every success, there's an equal and opposite crime,
Time to speed it up and let nobody else waste your time.
Never bite the bullet until the last grain drops,
Make every second count, till your heart races and stops.
No one else lives your life for you, so quit day dreaming,
Its time you picked up belief and started spinning.
I'm doped on betrayal, but not high on the stench,
Sometimes peace is the option I take instead of revenge.
Hope and Inspiration is my sun and the moon,
I look up in the sky, and hope to be in the stars soon.
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - Locke - 04-23-2011
I notice that nobody writes anything happy anymore...
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - Loukas - 04-23-2011
(04-23-2011, 09:48 AM)Locke Wrote: I notice that nobody writes anything happy anymore...
Yeah your right, all the stories and poems are usually about depression and stuff. It doesn't make them bad though.
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - Malfunction - 04-23-2011
This is very uplifting. Good job, OP
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - Colonel - 04-23-2011
nice work done, mate
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - BlackChaos - 04-23-2011
Thanks guys
I'll post a happy one in a few minutes
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - Loukas - 04-23-2011
(04-23-2011, 10:05 AM)BlackChaos Wrote: Thanks guys
I'll post a happy one in a few minutes
Good, I would much rather read about happiness than depression.
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - BlackChaos - 04-23-2011
Happiness it is then! How about love? ;)
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - Invincible - 04-23-2011
No one else lives your life for you, so quit day dreaming,
Its time you picked up belief and started spinning.
Impressive, Such a nice poem mate, Good Job
RE: [Poem] In The Stars - BlackChaos - 04-23-2011
(04-23-2011, 08:51 PM)_d3shI Wrote: No one else lives your life for you, so quit day dreaming,
Its time you picked up belief and started spinning.
Impressive, Such a nice poem mate, Good Job
Thanks =)
I try to express myself as best as I can when I write. So far, so good.