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RedactedRedacted - fuck_prohibition - 03-25-2011
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RE: Another poem. - Eve - 03-26-2011
This definitely is more focused. I like the image of the neighbourhood. Although the poem is simple to digest, there is a lot of issues which it covers.
8/10.
RedactedRedactedRedacted - fuck_prohibition - 03-26-2011
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RE: Another poem. - Peter L - 03-26-2011
It is very true and direct. Good work bud.