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Friend's poetry. - Codad Law - 03-22-2011
Here is one of her poems. I am keeping her identity a secret, but here is her poem.
when a man says get down on yours knees i do as im told,
just to cut his achilles, watch his blood flow.
to watch him scream and let tears stream,
down his face like the waves of a sea.
I kick his side to watch him gasp,
I can make him beg, and make him weep, but im through with, "sorry's," you're too weak,
when im done with that i'll slit his throat and end the waste of life he showed.
Now something I noticed strange is when she types usually almost every word is caps. As you can see in her poetry it is different. I've thought about this for a while, and it puzzles me.
When The Roses Die And The Water Runs Dry Souls May Die But No Longer Will He Lie. Liars Be Warned I Will Cut Your Tongue, Enjoying Being Hung Cause Your Fate Has Been Sung.
I'm trusting you guys to not copy and use as your own.
RE: Friend's poetry. - Eve - 03-22-2011
Both poems sound like the chanting or narrative of an event, and the capitalising of letters does have an effect. With the first poem, it reads like a story. With the second, it reads like an announcement.
RE: Friend's poetry. - fuck_prohibition - 03-23-2011
I don't really like horror poems, or whatever you may call them.
I am particularly interested in happy stories or love poems.
It sounds like your friend is depressed :/
RE: Friend's poetry. - Eve - 03-24-2011
(03-23-2011, 03:08 PM)cody8295 Wrote: I don't really like horror poems, or whatever you may call them.
I am particularly interested in happy stories or love poems.
It sounds like your friend is depressed :/
I found the poems violent, or tough-talking.
RE: Friend's poetry. - SeaBanana - 06-19-2011
Horror Poems are really boring in my opinion.