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A few songs + lyrics I wrote. - Altheren - 03-06-2011 Hey everyone, within the last few months I've gotten pretty good at making music and lyrics, I'd like to share a song I wrote that I need some critique on. Because I've sorta hit a point where its hard to get better at making music with trial/error. All I ask is that you don't steal what I make (no matter how horrible it sounds ![]() Heavy (just me working with a distorted guitar) Some rap song (I wouldn't really call this rap but I don't really know what else to classify it as \__-(O_o)-__/ ) The Greater Loss Here are the lyrics to The Greater Loss: All this time I had to spend I lied to myself again An investment I thought I'd win I didn't have any use for this ------ In my mind there is no light Nothing will let me think just right How could you think I won't fight? This is not something you can win ------ In the end there is a call You might not hear it you might fall Listen up or you'll regret it all I want you to remember this ------ If I'm going down your coming with me To be honest it would set me free To escape the binds of reality I really can't wait to see what's on the other side ------ Again and again we want to find Some place that we can hide Facing the truth is hard to do I will not turn out like you ------ Some rap song (havent really thought of a name) lyrics: Go with the show When everything and everyone is slow You never know Well it really can't hurt to ask I mean noone ever starts out riding first class If you do you never really were built to last You can't find out who you were if you don't try Dont fill yourself up with your pointless lies Ya never really know what you might find it just takes time so keep that in your mind How did we get here in the first place? What is left for us to face? _____ Remember: these are the ones I need help on, most of the music I make isn't half bad ![]() |