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Sanity. - Rhythm - 01-12-2011
I write these words with sorrow
my eyes hold back the sleep
my mind hangs by a thread
as I try not to weep
an earthquake in my head
as my motivation grows week
remembering the stories I'd once read
I write these words with sorrow
in hopes that I may keep
My sanity tomorrow.
RE: Sanity. - Deltron - 01-14-2011
So damn depressing....
RE: Sanity. - Cee Lo Green - 01-14-2011
Very... depressing, yet very heartfelt. Nice writing.
RE: Sanity. - Rhythm - 01-19-2011
Yeah wasn't exactly in the happiest state of mind when I wrote it.
Thanks for the comments guys
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RE: Sanity. - JohnRonder - 01-19-2011
You gotta chear up mate haha, people will admire your work more, as its good!
RE: Sanity. - Daniel Faraday - 01-24-2011
(01-19-2011, 04:02 PM)JohnRonder Wrote: You gotta chear up mate haha, people will admire your work more, as its good!
The truth of one's emotions should have no hold on what you feel about his work.