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The Words That Murdered - Amped - 10-22-2010
A song I wrote, on the Alternative Rock side.
Come here and listen
Do you hear it
The words of murder
The words that murdered
The ears of an angel
Start to leak blood
Left in the air to dangle
The final fight left within
The heart is slowly beating
Whats it seeing
Darling the beauty stopped breathing
Now here I sit bleeding
Never a fan of goodbyes
but this is destined to be
The angel now lies
Beneath the bleeding skies
Death flowing in my veins
The waves start to crash
Memories start to flash
Memories start to flash
Death flowing in my veins
While the angel restrains
Cutting the tears
That left it there to dangle
I'll never let it happen again
Memories start to flash
Kissing in the rain
Before our sins clashed
And before my tears ruined
What we had inside
RE: The Words That Murdered - AceInfinity - 10-22-2010
Since songs are free-verses it's hard to judge this one, but the theme is alright. It would be better to hear the timing and everything through a voiced lyric version of this, but it's good.
RE: The Words That Murdered - -paradox- - 10-22-2010
I agree. You should sing it to us.
Very attention grabbing song name though. I wasn't ever planning on posting in this section because this is one of the things I know nothing of. The title grabbed me though.
RE: The Words That Murdered - Amped - 10-23-2010
Well I will NOT sing it for you
Just cause I want to save my self from laughter hahahah.But it's sort of sung like this.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVwKfUnWrf4
Not exactly like it.. but you get the concept.