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Is this a dream? - Pineapple - 10-19-2010
Is this a dream
Or is it a nightmare
Frankly i'll give it all but I just don't care
As long as I'm away from this place
Its only way I feel safe
Give me eyes
Give me a speech
And you tell me not to speak?
My mind
My dreams
My hopes
Does it all mean nothing to you?
Is this a dream
Or is it a nightmare
I'll capture it all but frankly I just don't care
About you
Or anyone else
This is my life
Leave me alone.
Give me dreams
Tell me not to dream
Give me hope
Tell me to hope for the worst
Give me breath
Tell me to hold it
Is this what we have become?
Is this a dream
Or is it a nightmare
Frankly i'll do it all, just because I don't care
About nothing.
This is Version 1
RE: Is this a dream? - Eve - 10-20-2010
Frankly i'll do it all, just because I don't care
About nothing.
Favourite line. The emotions of the poem are contradictory,
Give me dreams
Tell me not to dream
so there is a certain sad fatalism about it. I look forward to version 2.