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Love Poetry - Solidus - 10-19-2010
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RE: Love Poetry - Sam - 10-19-2010
Very nice poem. I love the structure and the meaning. It sounds to me like it's come from the heart, true feelings for someone?
Favorite line:
"The beauty of your eyes, the softness of your skin;
Admiring you is such pleasure, it must be a sin;"
However I think this didn't work:
My happiness, my hope, and freedom of all fears;
Always my love, not matter how far or near;
The speech doesn't flow for me on that line. However it's a great first poem. I look forward to reading more.
p.s. You also but "Not matter"
RE: Love Poetry - Solidus - 10-19-2010
I had real trouble with that line.
This isn't my first btw, just my first in a long time. I used to do this a lot.
RE: Love Poetry - Sam - 10-19-2010
(10-19-2010, 05:36 PM)Jay Wrote: I had real trouble with that line.
This isn't my first btw, just my first in a long time. I used to do this a lot.
I can tell it's not your first. I really liked it. One of my favorite on SF.
RE: Love Poetry - Eve - 10-20-2010
You tell you love me,
and I know it's true
Favourite line. Did you enjoy writing this?
RE: Love Poetry - Solidus - 10-20-2010
More will follow..................../
RE: Love Poetry - Eve - 10-20-2010
Thank you, sweetheart.
RE: Love Poetry - Solidus - 10-20-2010
(10-20-2010, 05:46 PM)Eve Wrote: Thank you, sweetheart.
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RE: Love Poetry - Eve - 10-20-2010
Thought, sought, ought, fought.
RE: Love Poetry - Charmz - 10-25-2010
Good job. Its nice.
