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first web banner - bkotz - 10-07-2010
ok so i made this for my school cuz they asked me to do the banner for the online yearbook there makin.
![[Image: MBITyearbookLogo.png]](http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz84/bkotz1991/Photoshop%20work/MBITyearbookLogo.png)
the text is comercial free and the pic was taken by one of the teachers i just touched it up
what do u think? and what can i do to improve it?
RE: first web banner - Fragma - 10-07-2010
Sorry but I really don't like it. The graffiti font is horrible as is the other font used. Don't like the black border or the dark red background.
I think for a profession look you should work with more school photographs and blend them together as a background. Then do the text over the top of it.
RE: first web banner - NinJa_12 - 11-01-2010
(10-07-2010, 02:25 PM)Fragma Wrote: Sorry but I really don't like it. The graffiti font is horrible as is the other font used. Don't like the black border or the dark red background.
yes i agree, the grafitti front definately does it no justice whatsoever.it would work better with a more professsional text style
RE: first web banner - Arеs - 11-04-2010
No offense, but I don't like it.
Try changing the text.
Try adding a text stroke.
Try adding some text effects.
RE: first web banner - Marik™ - 11-04-2010
It's great for a first web banner. Guys, why don't you just give him some slack?
He tried to make one, I don't see neither of you have a thread with a fist banner made.
RE: first web banner - Nemmyy - 11-04-2010
(11-04-2010, 10:54 AM)Marik™ Wrote: It's great for a first web banner. Guys, why don't you just give him some slack?
He tried to make one, I don't see neither of you have a thread with a fist banner made.
It's called constructive criticism, we tell him what we think. Plus, bkotz is really good at making graphics anyways.
I agree with everyone else.
RE: first web banner - bkotz - 11-04-2010
(11-04-2010, 12:19 PM)Nemmyy Wrote: It's called constructive criticism, we tell him what we think. Plus, bkotz is really good at making graphics anyways.
I agree with everyone else.
idk bout REALY good
i do alright
RE: first web banner - Fragma - 11-04-2010
Bkotz is the worst I've at Graphics I've ever seen.
Spoiler (Click to View)
RE: first web banner - bkotz - 11-04-2010
(11-04-2010, 01:23 PM)Fragma Wrote: Bkotz is the worst I've at Graphics I've ever seen.
finally some1 sees it as i do
RE: first web banner - Marik™ - 11-04-2010
The text's height is too much.