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Second render sing - Farm - Robbieava - 09-30-2010
![[Image: fc0c7adb.png]](http://upit.cc/images/fc0c7adb.png)
Original render
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![[Image: 7e35cd3c.png]](http://upit.cc/images/7e35cd3c.png)
Original back ground
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![[Image: 0cede782.jpg]](http://upit.cc/images/0cede782.jpg)
C&C please!
RE: Second render sing - Farm - NEC - 09-30-2010
I don't like having two focal points: the house and the girl. It just seems that you threw some C4Ds and the girl render in there, along with some text.
I'm not a fan, sorry. I've seen better from you.
RE: Second render sing - Farm - deantehnoob - 09-30-2010
(09-30-2010, 08:25 PM)NEC Wrote: I don't like having two focal points: the house and the girl. It just seems that you threw some C4Ds and the girl render in there, along with some text.
I'm not a fan, sorry. I've seen better from you.
i am going to have to say that i disagree with you, i think that it looks really good, and the main focul point (the girl) is alot stronger then the house. good job
RE: Second render sing - Farm - Untouch - 10-01-2010
Take out the render and it would look much better.
Also the dots don't really suit.
All I can think of right now that instead of having that render maybe put like some wolves in the background, not sure what else could fit.
RE: Second render sing - Farm - Swat Runs Train - 10-01-2010
I like it, appears as if she is dreaming of the shack.