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a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - welsh_emo - 09-25-2010
well i wrote this when i was only started on self harming last year, march.
March Was The Lonely Start,
When I Thought I Found My Heart,
Then I Watch As It Tore Even More Apart,
But My Friends Were Never That Far,
April Was Long And Hard,
Were I Pushed Too Far?
It Just Took A Few Cans,
Of Pop And Plenty Of Dreams,
To Realise None Was As It Seems,
May Was The Most Tiring Of All,
Hours Sitting Curled Like A Ball,
But Still I Could Not See,
What Had Cause Such A Misery,
Days I Wondered If I,
Could Ever Be Set Free,
June Was Most Tempting Of All,
Long I Wished For A Call,
Anything That I Could Do,
To Ease My Mind And Feel Tall,
Once More I Would Fall,
July Was The Most Of Frustration,
So Much Concentration And Temptation,
I Were Weak Minded And Heart Binded,
Very Little Could I Speak,
My Goal Remained the Same,
To Seek "Her" Once More,
August Was The Fall Of My Sins,
I Was Blinded To See No One Wins,
But No Longer As I Can Now See,
What I Had Done And What I Deserved,
This Time I Thought As No One But Me,
No Longer Will I Cry For My Freedom.
September Is My Future And Pride,
I Will See My Loved Ones Once More,
And I Will Seek Their Very Thoughts,
When They Discover My Face,
On The Other Side Of This Very Door,
You May Not All Understand,
This Poem Can Be Read By Both Kind,
And The Heart Blinded,
But May Only Be Understood,
By The Heart Binded
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This Is Based On The Most Important Period Of My Life
And Forever May I Remember, Or Forget Them.
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - superjoe128 - 09-26-2010
WOW this is very depressing but it's good to your taking out your depression in poetry.
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - welsh_emo - 09-26-2010
(09-26-2010, 04:55 AM)superjoe128 Wrote: WOW this is very depressing but it's good to your taking out your depression in poetry.
cheers, this was march 09.. i got rather practical methods now
thanks.
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - Deadmau5 - 09-26-2010
Very cool! You should post on poetry sites.
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - welsh_emo - 09-26-2010
(09-26-2010, 11:06 AM)Melted Wrote: Very cool! You should post on poetry sites.
na, this isn't my thing
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - superjoe128 - 10-01-2010
Make it your thing! You are very talented.
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - ϟ ⓇⓞⓎⓐⓁ ⓇⓐⓘⓃ ϟ - 10-05-2010
Dam man you should deff post some more poems
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - SpankDaHobo - 10-06-2010
How long did it take you to write that? I normally only write about 6 sentences then I get bored...
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - GuJJu - 10-06-2010
You have written a nice poet.
I think you must go forward with it.
)
RE: a downer poem i wrote march 2009..umm no name - Shirosaki. - 10-06-2010
Nice poet, could be a song :p