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Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - sLeepyK0z - 08-16-2010
I am The Lyrical Hypnosis, I am a poet. The only thing I rep is being creative with my lyrics.
The truth is, I'm lost without you left to stray
You really are out of this world because when I'm with you, you take my breath away.
There's no place I'd rather be, than with you if I was facing death today.
Just something I put together. I know it's not much but just a lot on my mind.
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - Sam - 08-16-2010
It's quite a nice meaningful poem. Is this a WIP i.e in a first stanza or is this a small piece?
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - sLeepyK0z - 08-16-2010
It's just a small piece. It didn't take me long, it all just came to me pretty easily, it's a lot easier to make a poem about what you are feeling rather then just random things.
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - nikjerry - 08-20-2010
Yes, thats easy for you to make as well as I also want to say that its really that much easy to remember. I just want to say that it is short and sweet. The one thing is that if we want to remind that than also it is easy to be remember.
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - ndee - 08-20-2010
It's short, meaningful, and has a cool kick to it.
Good job.
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - KronHelp - 08-28-2010
I liked it, good job.
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - Sιℓνєя - 08-29-2010
very creative, meaningful.
i like it, very nice (:
RE: Lyrical Hypnosis Poet - Michaelmhmhmh - 08-31-2010
You should make one that rhymes those are cool!